Author's Description:
An angry young man grows up to be an angry middle-aged man. Now he's stuck in a dead-end job, married to a woman that detests him, and has children that don't even know him. A close encounter with death makes him realize that he deserves more than what life has dealt him thus far. Can he get it? CHAPTERS WILL BE POSTED EVERY OTHER DAY!
Size: 666 KB ( ~ 126,293 words)
In Progress
Genre: Romance
Age Rating: Anybody
Tags: Romance, Humor

Review by underwoodjay   [other reviews by underwoodjay]

Reviewed: 2020-07-14 - (Review Updated: 2020-07-16)


This is an on going review of “Thunder and Lightning“ a story of a simple man by ”Lazlo Zalezac”. This will be an evolutionary review as Lazlo’s story is published this review will evolve.

We are introduced to Jerry Smith (even though we don’t learn his last name until chapter two), an extremely large manager of a auto parts warehouse, who has anger issues, large anger issues. As we become involved with Jerry his frustration and his lack of control, things begin happening around him.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9