I downloaded Grammarly as was suggested. I have done an edit on chapter 7 only. When I am done with the story I will try to do a much better edit. I am not an editor, I read a lot but seldom write anything. I appreciate that I have people who are trying to help just know I am an old man and school for me was over mid 70s. That being said I will try improving as I go! Have a great day and thanks for reading!