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I let a few rough feedbacks knock me off the mood. Yet I also got a lot of good ones and this last week I got several that brightened things up.. I'm doing this for fun and hope some of you have fun reading it!
I downloaded Grammarly as was suggested. I have done an edit on chapter 7 only. When I am done with the story I will try to do a much better edit. I am not an editor, I read a lot but seldom write anything. I appreciate that I have people who are trying to help just know I am an old man and school for me was over mid 70s. That being said I will try improving as I go! Have a great day and thanks for reading!
We all have problems come up and I have had them the last several weeks. No excuses just not getting things done as fast as I should. I will finish this story and hopefully in a timely manner. Can't promise how good it will be as I have never written more than a letter since I have been out of school and that was in the 70s. I do hope you enjoy it and I want to thank those who have sent messages!
Just posted another part, sorry for the wait. I will try to get another part up this weekend with Matt and Joe's travels. Thanks for the notes and feedback
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