Firstly: it is not proofread by an outsider person.
I have been suffering from one thing or another for the last year and am living in a brain fog. I hurried to get this final rewriting done and posted just-in-case I'm dying. After 12 rewrites it is far from what it was. It was wrote to be fractured, but my current brain fog state did not help. I have no idea how it is going to read. I tried to make it less offensive to some, but because of the heavy religious nature to it I still had to maintain the truth of it. Keep reading as there is hope for all.
Good luck and God bless.