As of 2014 I have given up on my writing career and started painting. Which I guess is good for you folks because I have just uploaded my full, proof read, novels. At least they should be read by someone. So much for making a life and getting off of disability. I'd ask you to donate a dollar using my paypal account, but I haven't worked it out yet.
Thank you for reading.
My paintings are done under the same pen name of Allan Kindred.
For those people who like to negatively harp on the same issues over and over again, do you really think that is going to help anybody learn?
I posted Second Chances chapter by chapter so I felt rushed to get a chapter done and posted. Therefore they were not edited as many times as I normally do and they were not sent off to my proofreader.
I don't have time to go back and correct now as I'm working on new stuff to get published. If you want to criticise stuff I post for free whatever, but go to amazon and buy my full novels there and then tell me if I can write.
Thanks to all the positive comments and the helpful corrections. I'm always happy to learn.
I just reposted Second Chances because the way I had it set up it didn't format correctly. Hopefully it will come out better. As for other people doing a chapter it's looking to be more trouble than it is worth, but if for some reason somebody wants to do a chapter we can work it between us and then I would post it with the notation of who wrote the chapter.
Or something like that.
I will continue to add to it. Thank you for reading.
I don't like the way it laid out. My fault. I should have called part one, chapter one. I should have called part two, chapter two and I should have called story one, chapter three. So when it comes to other people doing a part of it they would in aspect be writing a chapter so they will all need to come from the same place and build towards the same goal, which is helping ghosts fulfill their second chance and get into heaven. Magical objects and adventures can be a part of the overall journey.
I'm not sure if this qualifies to be turned into a universe.
Anyway, I'm slowly learning and getting back up to speed.
Thank you for your patience and I am willing to listen to any and all ideas.