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"I'm dissapointed.
Sex at 15 may be a bit common (not as common as
some claim) but not emotionally appropriate."
I'm not sure what "emotionally appropriate" means. No one knows Rebecca Harris like I do and for her, yes, it's emotionally appropriate. If you watched "Oprah" I think they would label it co-dependence (but in a good way).
Characters do what they do. As a writer you are actually done once you fully realize the character. At that point they tell me their story. When it comes to Rebecca and Tony don't question. There is an insane level of trust there.
Anyway, with me, expect the unexpected. I like to make you a nice little safe place full of cliche's and all that. Then I blow it all up. If my stories go right where you think they should then anyone could write them.
Hint: If you are waiting for the classic 'prom scene' you are way off base. You're about to get something you aren't expecting, enjoy!
Tony is actually insane, or at the very least he has a serious psychological complex when it comes to young girls. You will see it again and again. You will see him as just a 'nice guy' but he's really a bit loony after the death of his baby sister.
As with all comments, I appreciate your point of view. In this case I disagree.
EzzyB
I took a big hit there. The original chapter 14 was a bit too explicit for the site. I noticed the scoring took a big hit after that one was posted, I agree.
The hot-tub scene originally contained nudity which I didn't realize was against the rules (there was nothing explicit, just nudity). So when it was rejected you got a hastily edited version with a really unsatisfactory ending to the chapter. I hate it too, but I didn't want to delay the posting of the story so I did a quick edit to meet the guidelines for now. Perhaps I'll re-write the chapter in the future.
You can see the original in the files section of my message board on Yahoo if you like.
Chapter 15 starts slow but you will love the ending.
The entire story is now in the queue. Expect a chapter every two days until the ending.
EzzyB
There are a lot of reasons why chapters are posted once or twice a week. Rebecca Danced is a complete story and it will be presented at around a chapter every other day.
There is also a sequel called 'Anita's Rescue' that is complete, though it lacks a bit of editing to make it compatible with this site. So that will come next.
A third (and final) chapter of the Chaos series will follow, though I'm still writing that.
EzzyB
I tried to set up a chapter a day for the next three days but the submission system is giving me trouble. You should have the next three chapters tomorrow sometime.
EzzyB
---This is fixed now.
Welcome to my small little corner of the writing world. What you will find will most be young adult stories. Romances like Rebecca Danced or its more dramatic sequel Anita's Rescue will be found here.
Enjoy the Stories!
EzzyB
PS a technical glitch is causing all the quotation marks to be stripped. I'm working with the site operator to get that fixed.
*Glitched fixed and the quotation marks seem to be back in their proper places.* Sorry if the first few chapters seemed a bit amateurish because those were missing, I promise you my writing is better than that! Thanks to the Finestories team for fixing it promptly.
Ezzy
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