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My editors warned me about fore-shadowing. It's a technique you use to put something in a story that hints about what's to come.

The last line of chapter 10 is such.

You are all wrong. I won't comment on what you all think will happen, you know what it is. I pride myself on putting readers in stereotypical situations then changing things up a bit.

Wait until chapter 13 and all will be revealed. But you are wrong :)

EzzyB

A bit of drama there and one more character to introduce.

EzzyB

I certainly appreciate and an all corrections you send in.

I research a LOT. You won't often find me wrong on a fact check but if you do I'll fix it. Wikipedia is EVIL if you get your facts from there you are only getting your facts from the latest updater who thought he knew what he/she was saying. Don't quote me Wikipedia as a source (go to the footnotes and take it a step further).

Dialog is huge in my stories. Correcting my dialog to match the Queen's English is futile. The dialog is spoken word, normally, in my case, spoken by teenagers from the deep south. It most certainly should not be perfect. Indeed it should be quite flawed.

Think twice before sending me dialog corrections please.

That said I'll make any legitimate corrections as soon as I can.

EzzyB

And so the second story begins. You will be wondering who Anita is, and you will wonder for a while. Anita's entrance is rather quick and dramatic so just wait for a while, you will understand when it happens.

Fair warning (and you'll see this again) this is a sequel in the worst sort of way. If you haven't read Rebecca Danced you just aren't going to get a lot of what is going on here. Some of it is fairly subtle.

As soon as the first chapter is posted I'll put the two into their own series.

EzzyB

I got a barrage of E-mails today, all of them positive. For those who chose to comment anonymously I thank you. For those that didn't I always answer every comment and I'll do so soon.

This is a bit of an older story, originally completed more than a year ago.

This week I'll edit the newer story to fit the Finestories guidelines (it should be fairly easy). Look for "Anita's Rescue" in the coming days. It follows our cast and adds a couple of new members on their summer adventure.

Lets just say something makes the destination of that summer cruise a no-brainer. What happens along the way is just Chaos.

EzzyB