Well, I thought I'd have to do a lot of rewriting on chapter seven, but it turned out I was wrong. By the way, I hope you all caught the Billy Bob Thornton reference I slipped in there.
If you can bear it, then please indulge me for just a little while longer with Tim and his father's meanderings. The story, which I wrote basically to see if I could do it, is about relationships and growing up. That's why it was important to establish the father-son dynamic as they roamed across the country. I trust it's not a spoiler to say that there will be some additional dynamics coming soon.
My thanks go to those who have contacted me and I hope you all keep reading and enjoying.
I just submitted chapter four so that should be up soon, but my posting rate may slow a bit as I need to rewrite some scenes to adapt to this site. TeNderLoin has been doing a great job editing and has been very responsive to my chapters and questions - the delay is on my end.
Late last week I contacted TeNderLoin to see if he'd be willing to take on a new project and a first-time author. Thankfully, he agreed. I've learned a lot just from the first four chapters that have undergone the editing process and want to express my thanks to him. I promised that he wouldn't have to slog through bad grammar and an incoherent storyline, and I hope that by the end of this journey that promise will have been kept.
I hope you enjoy my offering - it was fun to write and to learn to write along the way.