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I let a few rough feedbacks knock me off the mood. Yet I also got a lot of good ones and this last week I got several that brightened things up.. I'm doing this for fun and hope some of you have fun reading it!
Hope you enjoy and thanks for the kind words and help!
I downloaded Grammarly as was suggested. I have done an edit on chapter 7 only. When I am done with the story I will try to do a much better edit. I am not an editor, I read a lot but seldom write anything. I appreciate that I have people who are trying to help just know I am an old man and school for me was over mid 70s. That being said I will try improving as I go! Have a great day and thanks for reading!
We all have problems come up and I have had them the last several weeks. No excuses just not getting things done as fast as I should. I will finish this story and hopefully in a timely manner. Can't promise how good it will be as I have never written more than a letter since I have been out of school and that was in the 70s. I do hope you enjoy it and I want to thank those who have sent messages!
Just posted another part, sorry for the wait. I will try to get another part up this weekend with Matt and Joe's travels. Thanks for the notes and feedback
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