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An angry young man grows up to be an angry middle-aged man. Now he's stuck in a dead-end job, married to a woman that detests him, and has children that don't even know him. A close encounter with death makes him realize that he deserves more than what life has dealt him thus far. Can he get it?
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Posting on Saturdays!
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Enjoy!
I have fixed and reposted all of the chapters you readers have let me know were bad.
If you see any more, let me know and I'll fix them, too.
Thank you all for your patience.
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TeNderLoin
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AAAAAARRRRrrrrrrrghh!!!!!!!!
It seems that the raw edits posted, instead of the clean edits.
I am trying to fix things, but I need reader feedback!!!!
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If you see raw edit errors (ie "recievedreceived"), the things I have fixed, but the original errors are also still there, PLEASE let me know!!!!!!!
The story of Burl. He's just an average guy ... or is he?
Posting on Mondays.
The entire Jade Force series has been edited and reposted, including the final chapters of "World War: The Campaign for Eastland" and the final chapter: "World War: The Campaign for Besland"
Enjoy!
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TeNderLoin
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