Final Breath of a Dead God by Celtic Bard


Description: An old man walks through a odd city with his grandson sent to keep an eye on him by his mother. The mother, daughter of a bard, married into the family of an Oligarch. As such, she hates when stories of her father entertaining in pubs filter to her in-laws. Pzerra is there to prevent that. His grandfather takes him to his favorite pub for lunch. A strange man walks in, causing the patrons to eye him hostilely. After he leaves, the boy asks the old man why they hate him so. Thus begins the story!
Size: 32 KB ( ~ 6,068 words)
Type: Fantasy
Age Rating: Anybody
Tags: Supernatural, Fantasy, Magic

Review by therev   [other reviews by therev]

Reviewed: 2014-09-17


I found this to be a bit of a different take on a religious matter. It seems to merge Judo-Christian theme with a bit of the old pagan / Nordic beliefs.

It is set as an story teller passing on knowledge in the form of tales to all who will listen, after a stranger enters the bar & makes a toast.

I found it well told, interesting, with a touch of the old Nordic "it could have been"; together with a good moral theme.

Very enjoyable.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10