For those people who like to negatively harp on the same issues over and over again, do you really think that is going to help anybody learn?
I posted Second Chances chapter by chapter so I felt rushed to get a chapter done and posted. Therefore they were not edited as many times as I normally do and they were not sent off to my proofreader.
I don't have time to go back and correct now as I'm working on new stuff to get published. If you want to criticise stuff I post for free whatever, but go to amazon and buy my full novels there and then tell me if I can write.
Thanks to all the positive comments and the helpful corrections. I'm always happy to learn.