I've done it again! In the opening of chapter 18 I called the villian 'Marcus Anthony' not 'Marcus Anderson'! this was missed by me during my read through.
On another note, I was asked why didn't Chris cure Evelyn ... (I hadn't thought of this at all) but while I was answering I realised that it opened a new story, what happens when a cure for all ills is announced, what would Governments and criminals do to ensure they kept control? this will have to be for the fourth story in the series.
BUT I'm working on a completely different story which may have to be shelved so that I can keep writing on this ... what to do? What to do?