The Outsider: Blog

January 23, 2017
Posted at 9:52 pm

The Good and The Bad

First, the good points: 1.) Over the weekend I submitted the first five chapters of my next story to my intrepid editor. 2.) My writing time seems to be on the rise again. 3.) I'm finding my writing groove again at the same time.

The bad: 1.) I've realized even before I receive Graybyrd's edits the first five chapters will need more work; the storyline needs expansion in places to align with the premise in the story summary. 2.) I am maybe one-third to one-half of the way to where I would like to be in terms of an available chapter buffer while posting; I don't want to change my posting schedule once announced so I may even try finishing the entire story before I post, though that's still not certain.

There's still no firm date on when I'll start posting again, but it's closer than it's been to this point.

December 22, 2016
Posted at 1:52 pm

Okay, so...

Best laid plans and all that, right?

One of the graphics projects I mentioned in an earlier post is turning into a possible commercial venture for my friend, with me as the technology "consultant" for his website, etc. This and increased responsibilities at work have, again, reduced the amount of time available to write during the past two months.

While I do have two and a half chapters written in the new story, they need heavy modification before I think about sending anything to Graybyrd; I also want to have much more of the story down on "paper" first before posting. I'm hopeful the holidays will allow me time to slow down and plant myself in front of the computer.

May you all have a safe and happy conclusion to 2016, find joy in being with your families at whichever year-end holiday(s) you choose to celebrate, and may we all enjoy 2017.

November 6, 2016
Posted at 10:54 am
Updated: November 14, 2016 - 2:18 pm

Small Tweaks and Big Thank You

I've just finished a small revision of "A Charmed Life," cleaning up various errors in punctuation, continuity, and consistency. The underlying story is unchanged, this was more like a fresh coat of paint and a few upgrades here and there. I can't see making any other major revisions at this time.

When I finished ACL last month, I tried to express here in the blog how thankful I was for Graybyrd's help and guidance since February, but what I was writing never looked right. Thankfully he contacted me before I'd gotten too far into the story to change course; he also let me continue to make the decisions on where that new course would take Jeff and company. In fact, other than some early suggestions about Jeff's character, the vast majority of the suggestions he made while ACL was being written were related to the story's structure and not the story itself. I was able to find the writing style I did through his guidance, knowledge and patience. I look forward to working with him on my next story.

My last blog entry was also lacking any meaningful thanks to you, the readers. I am glad so many of you enjoyed the story. In reading some of the forum posts over on SOL, I have also been humbled by your recommendation of ACL to others. I thank you all for voting on the story and for emailing along the way.

Two of the graphics projects I mentioned in the last post are finished, being simple one-offs, but the third is more than just a graphics project and could stretch for some time. While I do have a good start on my second story, this blog entry is the most I have written in weeks. I hope to use a lull in the project to return to writing, however briefly.

October 14, 2016
Posted at 11:30 pm
Updated: October 15, 2016 - 3:56 am


I've posted the final chapter of A Charmed Life tonight; thanks to everyone who took the time to read, email, etc.

My writing time will be limited as I'll be working on a couple of non-writing projects for friends, so it'll be a few months at least before I post another story. The good news is that I've already begun working on that next idea, and Graybyrd has agreed to work with me again. I'm hoping to begin posting by the end of 2016, but I'll have to see.

September 30, 2016
Posted at 5:20 pm
Updated: October 11, 2016 - 8:13 pm

Chapter 52 & Pronunciation Guide

The latest installment of A Charmed Life is in Graybyrd's inbox, but he was headed out of town this week, so I don't believe he's been able to get to it yet. I will post it as soon as I am able.

It also occurred to me earlier today that other than for the Town of Greenwich, I have not included help with the proper pronunciations of town names in Massachusetts which appear in the story (as well as selected others). To rectify that oversight, I offer the guide below:

Massachusetts Town Name Pronunciation Guide
(CAPITAL letters indicate which syllable to stress)

Amherst: AMurst
Ashburnham: ASHburnam
Ayer: AIR
Belchertown: BELCHertown
Billerica: billRICKa
Boston: BOSStun
Chicopee: CHICKapee
Concord: CONcurd (CAHNkid)
Devens: DEVVins
Enfield: ENfield
Everett: EVrit
Fitchburg: FITCHburg
Gardner: GARDner (adding "-hey" at the end optional)
Greenwich: GREENwitch
Groton: GROTTun (rhymes with "cotton")
Hardwick: HARDwick
Harvard: HAHvid (or HAHvud)
Lancaster: LANKister
Leicester: LESSter
Leominster: LEMINster
Lexington: LEXingtun
Littleton: LITTLEtun
Malden: MALden
Medford: MEDferd (occasionally MEFFuhd)
Melrose: MELrose
Methuen: methOOen
New Salem: new SAILem
Nauset: NAWsit (rhymes with "faucet")
Palmer: PALMer
Pelham: PELLum
Petersham: PETERSam
Pittsfield: PITTSfield
Prescott: PRESScot
Reading: REDDing
Shutesbury: SHOOTSbury
Shrewsbury: SHOESbury
Springfield: SPRINGfield
Ware: WEAR (where?)
Wakefield: WAKEfield
Westfield: WESTfield
Westover: WESTover
Woburn: WOOburn
Worcester: WUSSter (note the lack of an "H" sound)

PS: Say these as fast as possible for more authenticity.